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raju ach
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PostSubject: Re: Free iBT independent writing task submission   Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:44 pm

Different people have different opinion about doing things in their own way. Some people believe that things should only be done if it is enjoyable or give pleasure whereas others believe that non interested things are hectic to perform. As far as I am concern I believe that people should only do things only when they enjoy doing. I believe this because it gives self satisfaction, work perfection and fruitful result.

The first reason I believe this because self satisfaction is one of the major phenomena for doing any kind of work. For example, if the work what I do is not interesting it won't definitely satisfy me. As a result I might be ruined to do the other work as well.

Another reason I believe this because one should always be perfect while doing any kind of work that means less possible mistakes. If I am not enjoying the work I might come across plenty of mistakes. For example, in my last semester I took botany class. I really hate dealing with plants. Since the subject was not interesting to me I end up with failure and finally have to change the subject.

Finally I believe this because enjoyable work always bring fruitful result. Positive result is directly proportional to our interest, hard work and how enthusiastically we are doing it. for example, I was always interested in medical field since childhood. I always enjoyed dealing with human body. This interest of mine buildup my carrier as professional pharmacist.

in conclusion, I strongly believe that self satisfaction, perfection in work and fruitful result can only be possible if the work is enjoyable rather than hectic and stressful.
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PostSubject: Re: Free iBT independent writing task submission   Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:16 pm

I strongly`disagree to the the point that people should do things what they dont want to do . Because if a person do things they dont like that means they are not paying attention and they are not devoted , they are just doing things because they have to ,But on the other hand if a person doing the thing which he like to so atomatically hewill give his/her full devotion.
considerexmple of a student , When a student is not studing in a class as he should be althogh he is attending all the lectures he/she will not get good grades . On the other hand another student which is a also attending all the classes as the first one but he/she is attentive and listinig to the lecture which is delevering to him. so definately he/she will get grades compare to the first one that means that people should do things what they like to because the thing which is liked by the people ,people are giving 100% to it .
Take another example of life patner , Life patner is some thing that should be of your on choice ,If you want spend your entire life . Because life patner is something that if it is of your on choice then you would like to spend your with her you will involve in all matter you will take care of your patner and her likes and dislike . But if it is not of your like then you will like to spend time and you will not nagotiate her . arguing on little matters . thats all count if your patner is not of your like.
So the conclusion is that " Things which you are enjoying means you are giving 100% to it andd you are fully devoted to it . Which is required to be successful in every stage of life .[scroll][center]
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PostSubject: HEEEYYY   Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:54 pm

could anyone tell sometn about my essay ?

We should live a) only for today; b) only for tomorrow. Which position do you agree with and why.

Every person has a different view for the life. Some of them want to be comfortable in the future; some of them defend to be in peace today. In my country, people are generally eager to find a good job to make their future safe. My idea is different from their idea. Although most of the people want to live for tomorrow, I support the idea that we should live for today. There are several reasons why I prefer to live for today.


First of all, we cannot be sure whether we will be alive or not tomorrow. Therefore, thinking of future is totally pointless from my point of view, because only God knows about our future. For example, let’s assume that I am a worker in a factory. I am working hard without any social activity to be happy in the future. However, nobody can guarantee me to stay alive until tomorrow. I can die after a traffic accident after leaving the factory. If this happens, all I have done until this situation will not mean anything for me. After looking this illustration, I choose to be in the side of living for today.


Secondly, people mostly enjoy things when they are young, because physical and mental activities of people will not stay good as they are now. Physical inabilities can prevent people doing some activities. For instance, drinking alcohol with friends, playing sports games, and having lovely relationships are better when they are experienced for a person who is in young ages. Living for the future cause people to miss these kind of activities, so I prefer to accept mentality like “seize the day” meaning live for today.

In conclusion, I am convinced that living for today is better than living for the future. Our future is not clear when we look at it now, and living younger exactly fits into my body. In my opinion, if I have chance to do something, I would do it for now, not for later.
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PostSubject: People sometimes do things that they do not enjoy   Wed Jul 29, 2009 1:29 pm

Although, I was being taught that a conscious person should try to enjoy the life as much as he can, I think in order to enjoy and to receive much pleasure sometimes we need to do things we do not like.
To begin with, I want to stress that money for me is not the biggest treasure in my life and also money is not everything which make you happy and fulfilled. However, money gives you a chance to do things you like very much as travelling, doing sport, studying, communicating and expressing yourself. Taking these points into a consideration, I think that in order to receive some pleasures people need to work very hard and usually it is connected with the lack of free time, tiredness and other things which are not associated with enjoyment.
Secondly, every person has as rights as responsibilities in the society. To be a full part of a society person should follow some rules and restrictions. Law and order were created to regulate the civil life of the citizens. Sometimes these regulations contradict with the desire of the person. But following the rules maintains your status and creates a good basis for building a good life.
Concluding, my opinion is that people are required to do things they do not like. Life could not be taken as only the process of getting pleasure but the process of working and building the pleasure and enjoyment. In other words, enjoyment is a rare prize which you need to win. More you try more you get finally.
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PostSubject: Pls make comment and rating my writing!   Thu Aug 13, 2009 7:23 pm

Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the statement: People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.


It is hardly to image that a person does not like freedom in action and do what he/she wants to do. But each person belongs to the society and is one of the members of the society, thus, sometimes one has to do what he/she does not really want.

Being a member of the society, a person should follow the society’s rule and regulation to ensure the whole society’s benefits. If each person does what he/she enjoys regardless of the damage or violation of others, the society becomes chaos. A manufacturing company tries to maximize its profit and does not care about environmental issue, what will happen next? Not only the residents’ health who are adjacent to the company are affected but also the future generation’s one will be damaged.

During each person’s life, it might be more than one time a person has to choose doing what he/she does not like because of his/her future or in long time purpose. A student, who has got part time job in order to pay his/her tuition fee, might prefer spending more time on study or going out with friend. But in for the sake of brighter future, the student needs to do what he/her does not really adore.

In short, freedom in action or in other words that doing what a person wishes to do is still a dream that everyone tries to obtain but freedom should be conducted in a given limitation to guarantee other’s benefit as the whole or even for his/her current purposes.
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