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 Answer Submission for Part 3 / Question 8

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PostSubject: wty   Wed May 14, 2008 1:40 pm

I think is good to be promote. But the reason make me seeking promotion at work is wider career opportunities. Because if you get a good career then you 'll be esteemed by most of people in your company or maybe the city. You'll be got call by a better company and get a better job. If you got a better job, you would get greater income. So, if you got wider career opportunities then you get the other
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PostSubject: toeic WRITNG QUESTION 8   Wed May 28, 2008 6:22 am

in my opinion the self esteem and a great income are the two most important reasons for seeking promotions at work.

first of all, a person seeking a promotion has to be as confident as possible on his or herself, because the most one's promoted, the most the responsabilities at work increase, so confidence and determination are the strenght for succees.
for example while being in a situation to take an important decision for an important matter, the reponsable person has to be confident and sure before ending up with a final choice.

second, I also do believe that a self esteem is reached while getting a great income, as being wealthy so appreciate an oppulent life, having responsabilities which sometimes get on one' s favour , getting a wide carreer, are reasons to nurturn a person.

personnaly I aim to get a well paid job, be able to get off work for some hollidays and spend my saved money on travelling.
I m not seeking promotions neither hard reponsabilities.
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PostSubject: toeic WRITNG QUESTION 8   Thu Jun 12, 2008 1:50 pm

in my opinion, seeking promotions at work has to be related to self esteem, so a person who is confident is better improving his ou her position in a society, for instance, a seeker who is going to be promoted need to support a hiigh leveled responsability when getting a big decision
that s why the confidence is one the most important fact when seeking a promotion.

the other important fact is when a person is willing to get his or her career wider , since this target is reached the self esteem is obviously got, but also the money in the bank s account is risen
in that case the material status gets improved .

however a person wanting to get a promotion is willing to be recognised as a leader in a society.

personally i m seeking for a promotion because i feel that i can do better and more than what i m doing now. i can assume more chalenges and prove to myself that i m reliable enough to be respected by co workers and the members of a society.
all in all, i feel that i haven t reached all my potential yet.
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 8   Thu Aug 21, 2008 9:58 pm

The 3 main reasons for seeking promotions at work are surely greater income, self-esteem and wider career opportunities. But in the end, what is the most important in our life : having interesting conversations with other people, enjoying time at work, improving our skills, laughing about ridiculous situations, admiring the beauty of a colleague's face... I am not sure seeking promotions let us feel free and spontaneous in our work.
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question no. 8   Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:15 pm

In my personal opinion, The most important reason of seeking promotion is grerater income, and secondary self-esteem.
Because economic stability is a basic foundation of other activities. Even I am interested in social activities, if I don't have special talent in a particular field, I can't get a enough money to manage my family. Then my social activities will be shirnked naturally.
But if I get a enough money from promotion, I can do something good for my family, commnity, and country.

Secondary, self-esteem also very important reason of seeking promotion. After we have enough food to eat, we may seek self esteem. It is a very natural behavior of people.
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