Answer submissions for Part 1 / Questions 1-5

**Yannick** · Subject: Feedback/Score for Neverlan Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:55 am

Neverlan wrote:

1-the parking is in front of the airport terminal
2- the street where many cars parked is so quiet
3- there are four people talking about their job in the lobby
4- the woman is choosing the very fresh and good foods at the market
5- the train arrives on time as the man waits

Hello Neverlan.
Thank you for attempting Part 1 of onlinenglish’s TOEIC writing test.

This section (Q. 1-5) is graded out of 15 points, with up to 3 points total for each of your sentences. Take into account that to get a perfect 3, your sentence must be grammatically correct, use correct spelling, use both word prompts, and have a clearly meaningful connection to the picture concerned.

Your total score for this section is: 10/15

Your scores for each question:
1. 2/3
2. 2/3
3. 2/3
4. 2/3
5. 2/3

Possible corrections

1- The parking is in front of the airport terminal.
2- The street where many cars parked is so quiet.
3- There are four people talking about their job outside the lobby.
4- The woman is choosing the very fresh and good foods at the market.
5- The train arrives on time as the man waits.

Additional Aid

You were subtracted one point for not having a capital letter and a punctuation mark for each sentence.

Had I not subtracted one point from each sentence due to capitalization and punctuation you would have scored 14/15.

A lobby is a vestibule or a hall

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All the best on your test.

Yannick O'Neill
Managing Director: www.onlinenglish.net

**Yannick** · Subject: Feedback/Score for lampou Sat Jan 12, 2008 2:00 am

lampou wrote:

[1]THERE ARE SO MANY CARS IN FRONT OF THE AIRPORT TERMINAL.

2.IN THIS COUNTRY THE STREETS ARE SO NARROW, THERE THIS NO SPACE TO PARK.
3.FOYR PEOPLE STANDING INFRONT OF THE BUILD THEY ARE TALKING EACH OTHER BUT I DO NOT KNOW THE SUBJECT THEY ARE TALKING ABOYT.
4.
THERE ARE SO MANY THINGS TO BUY IN A MARKET!BUT THE PRICES ARE VERY DIFFERENT!IS THE QUALITY WRIGHT;
5.AS THE TRAIN IS NOT COMING THE MAN PROPABLY LOST HIS APPOINTMENT!

Hello lampou.
Thank you for attempting Part 1 of onlinenglish’s TOEIC writing test.

This section (Q. 1-5) is graded out of 15 points, with up to 3 points total for each of your sentences. Take into account that to get a perfect 3, your sentence must be grammatically correct, use correct spelling, use both word prompts, and have a clearly meaningful connection to the picture concerned.

Your total score for this section is: 9/15

Your scores for each question:
1. 2/3
2. 2/3
3. 1/3
4. 2/3
5. 2/3

Possible corrections

1. There are so many cars in front of the airport terminal.
2. In this country the streets are so narrow; there is no space to park.
3. Four people standing in front of the building are talking to each other about an unknown subject.
4. There are so many things to buy in a market at very different prices.
5. As the train is coming in late the man probably missed his appointment!

Additional Aid

1. Do not write your entire sentences using capital letters. There is no evidence indicating if you know how to use capital letters.

2. Keep your sentences simple. You are graded on your ability to describe a picture without committing any grammar and spelling mistakes.

3. Reread your sentences before submitting them. For example, in sentence 3, you lost an additional point because you did not use the word 'about'.

_________________
All the best on your test.

Yannick O'Neill
Managing Director: www.onlinenglish.net

Guest

There is a bus stop in front of the airport terminal.
There are so many cars parked in the street that I've decided to go away.
I can't imagine why he is talking to that people about you.
The tomatoes you find in this market are very well-grown.
As he waits for the train, he thinks about his past.

Guest

This beautiful sightseeing is in a front of airport terminal.

Guest

2. The street looks so quiet.
3. There are four people talking about something.
4. The market is very crowded now.
5. The man is waiting for the train as if it arrives late.