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Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

In my opinion, university students should be required to attend classes regularly rather than optionally. There may be a possibility that a student can do well even though he or she didn’t attend the classes regularly. There are many advantages in attending the classes regularly.

First reason is, by attending classes regularly, he can obtain knowledge from a teacher who can gain valuable knowledge. This knowledge will help him keeping with the latest information and syllabus, so that it will be easier for him to gain good score in final exam. But, if a student attending classes according to his will or once in a while the subjects may not be clear to him and he may not attain good knowledge and most likely to score low marks.

The second reason is when attending classes regularly one can know his standards by which he can improve himself towards excelling in his academic performance. He is pore focused on the subject. On the other hand a student attending the classes optionally can easily get distracted by the environment and spoiled his academic performance.


Finally, university students should attend classes regularly to gain proper knowledge and gain confidence to excel in final exams rather attending class optionally.

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a1doc