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 Answer Submission for Part 2 / Question 6

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PostSubject: TOIEC Writing question 6   Tue May 27, 2008 7:52 am

TO: Simon Valley Inc.

FROM: Melissa


I want to thank you for the faith and trust you gave on me.I'm looking forward to join the company and give out modestly my knowledge.
I want to know two important things :

first of all, can you tell me the number of staff we can hire.

second, I would know a bit more about the customers I m going to work with and which kind of services we provide them

once again, thank you for your congratulations and encouragement.
I am waiting for your request about what I mentioned above.

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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Thu Aug 07, 2008 2:14 am

Firstly, I would like to send my thanks for your attention. I hope that I can contribute much more to the company in the position of Merchandising Manager. Secondly, as a new Merchandising Manager, I do not know exactly all the works I must do. Hence, would you please send me a detailed work list for this position? Besides, please let me know the number of staff in Merchandising Department. With this information, I can manage my work to gain best effectiveness.
I look forward to hearing form you soon.

Best regards,
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Sun Aug 17, 2008 10:19 pm

From: Manhungo
To: Simon Valley Inc.
Subject: Thank you for your recommendation
Sent: August 18, 11:02 A.M.
I'm very happy to hear about my promotion. Firstly, I want to thank you for your appreciating me. That will be a challenge but I believe I can manage it. Could you tell me when can I start my new job and documents on my duties and responsibility as merchandising manager. I asle want to know about my new salary and award package too.
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Thu Aug 21, 2008 3:25 pm

Thank you for your congratulations ! You can be sure I will do my best for increasing sales of our company. In view to make my job as better as possible, I would like to know if it would be possible for me to choose the members of my team and what is the budget allowed to merchandising activities for this year.
I hope you will not regret your confidence in my work.
Best regards.
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PostSubject: TOEIC writing No. 6   Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:00 am

Thank you very much for your congratulations. I have two questions. Because I am a new Manager of the merchandising sector, I want to get some information from head office.
First one is all the directory and price of goods we are handling.
Second, amjor customers information in this area.
I appreciate your cooperation and I will wait for your reply.
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:32 am

Thank you for this opportunity for me to excel in the company. Will I be receiving a briefing of new position guidelines? Will I have a new supervisor or to whom should I report?

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PostSubject: promotion   Tue Mar 03, 2009 10:07 am

Thank you again for giving the opportunity to advance to Merchandising Manager. I have two questions regarding my position. First, when will my first day be effective as Merchandising Manager? Next, what is the salary based on commission or is it salary based? Thank you,
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing Question 6   Sun Apr 05, 2009 10:05 pm

To: Simon Valley Inc.
From: Marites
Subject: Thank you for your commendation
Sent: February 19, 10:20 A.M.

Thank you very much for the trust that this company has given me and promoted me as a manager of merchandising. I, however, have two questions to ask:

1) When will this position take effect?
2) When will be the orientation about my new position as well as my salary package and other benefits?

Thank you and more power to all of us.
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PostSubject: Reply the e-mail   Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:02 am

Thank you for the congradulations. I'll do my best on the area I am responsibing for. As you mentioned I can ask any question so I'd like to know where's my new office and is there any salary increased for the new title. Thanks again.


Kevin Chang 4/18/2009
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PostSubject: Question 6   Thu May 07, 2009 2:16 am

I am very pleased with my recent promotion and thank you kindly for your congratulations.

With respect to my new location, I would like to ask you from when you expect me to take office at our company headquarters.

I also would appreciate it if you could send me the dossiers of my new co-workers, those for whom I will be responsible, so I can start preparing a series of individual talks with them.

Many thanks
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Sun Jul 11, 2010 8:01 pm

I'm honored to have the opportunity to be able to work beside my soon-to-be friends at Simon Valley Inc. And I know that I'm capable for this job,with the amount of experience that I have, there will be no doubt that this company will regret me being the new Merchandising Manager.
I do have a few questions, very simple questions really. I'm concerned whether to keep Miss Blofield as Executive manager. I do not think that she is able to cooperate with the upcoming changes in the company. therefore I'm planning to have her removed.
Second, How many hours does the manager have to work? I have a busy schedual and I must know precisely how long I will be in office.

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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6    Sun Oct 24, 2010 5:19 am

Thank you so much for this opportunity. Im looking forward to start work with the company and to meet all the employees that I will be working with. I will be there on time monday morning. I do have som questions before I arrive. I going to need a rental car the first week to set up the new apartment and to get to work with every day the first week. What car rental company would you prefer for me to call? I have not bought any new cloth for the work and wondering it you can suggest a good store that I can buy a suit?
That is for now and I will see you all on monday.
Best regards
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Wed Nov 24, 2010 1:28 am

To whom it may concern: I appreciate for your e-mail which made me really comfortable. I'm sending you this message to ask for a couple of informations. Do you have any information which ex-manager wanted to let me know about this department? In addition, how should I contact with each employees when we have any problem? I look forward to hearing from you. Regards,
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Tue Jan 11, 2011 10:16 pm

I am extremely glad to be able to become part of this excellent company.
What does being the manager for merchadising include? Also, I would like to know the conditions which I am pleased to work under, ie the salary, office, etc.
And once more, thank-you for giving me an opportunity to become part of Simon Valley Inc.
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing q. 6   Fri Jan 28, 2011 6:38 am

Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you for your warm welcome! I am glad to be a part of the Merchandising Department and hoping to be able to contribute as much as I could.

I have a couple of questions before I start in the new office soon.
Will my access ID to the company's system still be the same as my previous one?
Also, I would like to know if there is any change or update in the general company's policy that I need to be aware of.

I appreciate your help.

Nancy Cramer
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PostSubject: Re: Answer Submission for Part 2 / Question 6   Mon Feb 07, 2011 10:43 pm

To: Simon Valley Inc.
Dear Sir/Madam:
I'm please that you have promoted me as a new Merchandising Manager of our company.It is my pleasure to serve and I will do my best in my duty, and be productive as our company grows. So far, I do not have any questions regarding my position. Many thanks.

Sincerely yours,
Miss Melinda

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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:35 am

Dear Simon Valley Inc,

Thank you for your congratulatory note. Since I am new in this position, I would be needing some assistance to get things going. I wanted to know who is the best person to help me out in the office. I wanted to know when is everybody be available for us to have a meeting.

Rest assured that we will succeed. Thank you and best regards,

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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Thu Mar 10, 2011 8:53 am

Dear all,

thanks for such a warm welcome. I'm so glad to pursue my career at Simon Valley and be sure that I will do my best in the following years to keep on contributing to the firm's success.
I would also take advantage from this mail to ask some questions.
First, I would like to know the exact location of my office, as I've just been given the building number.
Then, could you possibly indicate me if there are some specific company attached to this position (new ID, ...)?
Finally, I know that I'm supposed to start my new position only next week, but would it be possible to meet my new colleagues as soon as possible so that they can inform me about the current activity and issues in the Merchandising department.

Thank you for your answers.

Yours faithfully,

Frank Malaval.
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PostSubject: Question 6   Thu Apr 14, 2011 7:42 pm

Dear Sir of Simon Valley Inc.,

Thank you so much for the news, I'm so surprised. First of all, I would like to appreciate the cultivation by Simon Valley Inc., and all the coworkers that ever helped me at my work. Secondly, I will keep working hard and do my best on my position to bring more profit to the company.

However, if I may, I would like to know that does the company provide a pick-up service for this position? In addition, do I have my own secretary to arrange schedules for me? Since I am now a manager of a deparment, I may have things more than I can remembred, therefore a secretary could really helpful. Thanks in advance for the response, any given information will be greatly appreciated.

Again, thank you for such a wonderful opportunity, I knew my hard work will eventually being recognized.


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PostSubject: Promotion   Wed Apr 20, 2011 9:02 am

Thank you for considering me for this promotion ! Be at ease that you have chosen the right candidate for this job ! I will work hard to make this a success therefor benefiting our company and all employees !
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:56 pm

Thank you very much for the position. I will make sure to exceed all expectations, with hard work and dedication for my new job. I just wanted to know if will there be any changes in my work schedule? And i would also like some more information on my new job description. Thanks again, have a nice day.
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PostSubject: TOEIC Writing question 6   Tue Jun 07, 2011 7:27 pm

To Simon Valley Inc.

Thanks for giving me this great opportunity. I have been working very hard in order to get this position and fortunately I do get this promotion now, so I am very grateful and thrilled to begin my job as a merchandising manager. As a new manager, I know I, without a doubt, could handle a variety of tasks by myself, but I will appreciate it if I could have two executive assistants, male or female, who major in MBA. Also, if possible, could I recruit my teammates from my old department, because I am more familiar with them. Thank you very much. I am looking forward to hearing from you again.

p.s. A final question: when should I start my job as a merchandising manager. I am ready anytime.

Best regards,

Kevin Chuang
Marketing Specialist
Simon Valley Inc.
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PostSubject: TOEIC QUESTION 6   Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:38 am

Thank you for this opportunity i promise not to let you down . I would like to know when to start work and my powers as the manager for merchandising, that is what i can and cant do . thanks again for this great opportunity
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PostSubject: TOEIC,question 6   Wed Jul 27, 2011 7:51 am

To Simmon Valley Inc
First of all I grateful to you for opportunity to work in such reputable company .
As we discussed previous I am ready to start working from the next week.
Secondly,I would like to inquire about some details of my position.
As I understand I am expected to travel long distances.Do you provide the vehicle or return back the transportation expenses ?
Additionaly , I am interested to know whether I have opportunity to take some special days off because of the cultural holiday which celebration is important for me.
Thank you in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Krexma Rodrigis
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PostSubject: Re: Congratulations   Sun Aug 28, 2011 5:07 am

Thanks! for the promotion.

I would like to know about my new responsibilities. And, lastly from now onwards i should report
to whim.
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